近日，上海燎原双语学校国际高中(英文部)10年级学生进行了ESL课程视频作业的反馈。这是本学期的个人项目，是对知识掌握程度的总结，目的是希望大家在生活中良好运用additions and responses。我们以班级为单位，每个同学的视频研究主题都是不一样的(研究主题涉及两个相似的事物)。 确定好主题后，我们上网查找资料并采取实地考察、采访、问卷等方式总结出至少4个方面的共同点和不同点。

Recently, we had a Grade 10 ESL video show . This is our individual project of this semester which shows how much we have learned. The main purpose is to let us know the proper way of using additions and responsesin daily life. Every student in each class has their unique topic (a pair of items)to compare and contrast from at least four aspects. In order to have a holistic view on the topic, we used different methods and approaches such as interviews, surveys, data collection, field work, etc.

学生感言

Raymond

大家好，我是Raymond Gao，很高兴自己成功地完成了这个项目。

我花了很多时间研究这个问题。例如，我花了近3到4个小时来记录**部分的5分钟。我一遍又一遍地记录每个句子和词，直到我对它们感到满意**。

我之所以选择上海和首尔这两个国际城市，主要原因是我住在上海，另外，我已经去过首尔很多次了。我认为这两个城市有很多相同和不同的地方让我来比较和对比。

另外，我想感谢我的ESL老师Zoe Liu，她支持我，帮助我做这个**。

Hi, I'm Raymond Gao. I am very glad that I succeed this project.

I used plenty of time to work on the video. For example, for the 5 minutes recording part I spent almost 3-4 hours. I recorded each sentence and word time after time until I felt satisfied with my work.

The main reason why I choose Shanghai and Seoul, two international cities, is because I live in Shanghai and I had already been to Seoul many times. I suggested that these two cities share lots of similarities and differences, which is easy for me to compare and contrast.

Moreover, I want to appreciate my ESL teacher Zoe Liu who supports me and help me work on this a lot.(^-^)

Shelley

我一共花了至少3个礼拜的课余时间来完成这份主题为ZARA和H&M的个人视频作业。 前两个礼拜， 老师要求我们写出四个想分享的方面的大纲概要。原本以为自己不会花太长时间去完成这份研究，但相反，这着实需要一个过程，*括在网上寻找品牌资料，搜集一些有利用价值的信息，实地考察和整合等。

从这个项目中我了解了有关ZARA和H&M 的基本信息，也**了怎样用IMOVIE 和爱剪辑来制作简单的视频。更重要的是，现在我已熟练掌握这个语法点。

通过这一次的整体视频总结，我从其他优秀作品里找到了自己与他们的差距，也将继续修改和完善，争取更多的进步。

I spent at least 3 weeks to complete my individual video about Zara and H&M. In the first week of the project, the teacher asked me to write the outlines about the 4 aspects that I wanted to share. I thought it would only take me a few time to finish my analysis, but to my surprise, it was actually a great process to work, searching the official internet for each brand online, writing down the useful data, having field work in each store, etc.

From this project, I knew the basic information and strategies from Zara and H&M in the process of making video. I learned how to make a basic movie from IMOVIE and AIJIANJI as well. More importantly, I fully mastered how to use this form of sentences, such as “so do I” “Neither doesshe”, etc.

From the feedback of other excellent videos, I found the gap between me and other students. And this kind of feedback activity can let me know how to improve in order to do better nexttime.

Angela

最近，10年级全体同学在lecture hall上了一节特别的ESL课。我们欣赏了一些学生制作的优秀视频。我从这个作业中见识了很多非常有创造力的想法和炫酷的视频制作技巧。特别是Betty的视频，她的视频中的一个采访很有质量。而在Lily的视频中则有很多有趣的小细节，比如切题的广告流行歌曲，吸引人的开场和收场白等。总而言之，我觉得这是一个相互学习的好机会，与此同时，大家也收获了很多乐趣。

Recently, all of the grade 10 students had a special ESL class in lecture hall. We appreciated some excellent videos, which made by our classmates. I saw plenty of creative ideas and brilliant video making skills through their projects. Especially Betty Tu's video, there is even a qualitative interview in her video. What's more, there are also many small interesting details in Lily Wang's work, such as the nice advertising song and attractive prologue and epilogue. To sum up, I think it is a great chance to really learn from each other and most of us had a lot of fun.

优秀学生作品链接：

Cheap Hamburgers and Expensive Hamburgers (G10-1 Charlie)

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Electric cars VS Fuelcars (G10-1 Bob)

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上海和东京(G10-2 Roger)

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歌手和唱见 (G10-4 Betty)

古筝和古琴 (G10-4 Erica)

汉服和和服(G10-4 Helen)

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Line friends & Kakoo Friends(G10-4 Lily)

H&M和Zara(G10-3 Shelley)

上海和首尔(G10-4 Raymond)

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